So here on the top of my green shelf is a sentence with the amaryllis as the active subject...it is blooming. The other characters are good words themselves and I think the cartwheel is pretty verby.
If you step back to include the cliff of books you're moving into novel territory, or at least a long story. Including the fish definitely adds a few chapters although I'm not sure where they'd go...before or after the blooming and the cartwheeling.
I like the tipped orange glass box as some sort of punctuation.
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